Characters.5-6,Age 20 to 35 Mood.Mixed Sahil is a 12 class student who lives in Kishtwar district of jammu and Kashmir.Once he goes for a walk towards the river side on Sunday.Its calm all around.A couple is enjoying boat sail.Some people and dogs also near the river bank.Suddenly,the boat capsizes and the male partner overturns.Female cries for help.Sahil over the bridge dives into the river.Another young man also dives and both of them manage to save the couple.Rams early and quick action saved life of two humans
Ishwar , 28 years work as asoftware engineer in summer vacation he decided to go for trip at rishikesh he consult with his family members at this and finally decided to go for trip them ishwar call at tourism office of rishikesh and get the information of spot they went there and enjoy river rafting tracking attend puja they enjoy a lot and finally come home
Ram is a young IT professional. One day his company organised a tour to Uttarakhand and he agreed to join. They agreed to go for trekking at the Rupin Pass. They successfully finished the trek and Ram stood on a bridge for a while and admired the nature as he saw a couple strolling at the base with their pet dogs and a couple enjoying their boating expedition in the river flowing through the pass. He decided to take up a course in trekking to become a professional trekker. He left his job and successfully finished the course and became a certified trekker. He became a trekking guide at the Rupin Pass and later received a sponsorship from the company he had earlier worked to fund his trekking expeditions.
Rajan is a very dedicated and hardworking aspirant who was preparing for CDS examination, despite all his efforts,he was not able to qualify the examination so he decided to spend some time alone and visited nearby river in his locality where he was able to introspect and found his mistakes and now he was totally refreshed and returned home with more excitement and energy. This time he did not repeat his previous mistakes and able to qualify the CDS examination in the very next attempt
You could have taken a person who is in the boat who has friends and could have written about them rather than picking a alone person which shows that u could only relate to the person who is alone...
Rohan, age 16 He was student of class 10. It's a school trip to go gridih. Rohan was going to the bridge . He saw a beautiful seen of Nature. He enjoyed the trip and clicking a lots of pictures with friends and teacher. Now , all student was back to your home. he saw his pictures of trip to family
5 characters, 2 animals Backgrounds Happy/ positive. The land of God, Uttarakhand, has a very beautiful city of Rishikesh with the perfect mountains, Ram and Lakshman Khula with a amazing view of the magnificent river Ganga. The river Ganga forms Devprayag where it meets Bhagirathi a few kilometers above Rishikesh. Rahi, was visiting the city for the first time and was amazed with its beauty. In the evening he along with a guide thought to explore the city and went to see a no. Of cafes and spent quality time feeling the cold breeze of Ganga. During the day time he tried white water rafting in Ganga.
A boy on bridge who visited that bridge and seeing the view where a couple with two dogs standing like any person is capturing there photo and another couple on boat in river they where spending some good time together
5 characters, two main characters, one female and one male. Both are in neutral mood. Rony was college graduate who was preparing for CDS exam. He had cleared his exam and his SSB was due soon. He had been worried for quite some time and he wanted to talk it out with his friend Kumari. They met up by the riverside where they talked and she helped him realise that what he's feeling is natural and instead of fighting the feeling, he should use it to better prepare himself. This helped him clear his mind and calm down and afterwards they walked back home.
Yenepoya is the village it's 28km far from the city mangalore. it's hill area it's covered by forest area.Netravathi river is obstruct to yenepoya people to reach for city govt not taken any seriousness till.
Village people come and request to DC to build the bridge DC ordered finally the bridge is completed within 1 year of time Now every village peoples are happy They are easily go to city.
There is the boy name Raghu who was a very good artist and he draw a very good environment showing the beautiful nature with humans and got first price in the class .
Here suraj is prepared for RAW ,but it is his 3rd attempt in which he was fail he upset and go at river bridge he observe that one couple enjoying by boat sailing, one think he imbued the boat in direction opposite wave of river means couple enjoy when they push their obstacles(river wave) by boat stick and he click that "any type of your life journey is blissful when you trying to push yourself forwardly in negative waves like of river .so he learn that push his 3 rd attempt backward and vison keep as forwardly ,plan for his 4 th attempt
Here suraj is prepared for RAW ,but it is his 3rd attempt in which he was fail he upset and go at river bridge he observe that one couple enjoying by boat sailing, one think he imbued the boat in direction opposite wave of river means couple enjoy when they push their obstacles(river wave) by boat stick and he click that "any type of your life journey is blissful when you trying to push yourself forwardly in negative waves like of river .so he learn that push his 3 rd attempt backward and vison keep as forwardly ,plan for his 4 th attempt
Neeraj , 23 year old was feeling tired of living in big city with tall buildings surrounding him all the time. He took a vacation to Haridwar, Uttarakhand to refresh his mind ,standing on a bridge over gigantic yet calm river he felt calm and relaxed . The environment of the place was very soothing a couple was enjoying boating and another was walking along the bank of river. Two dogs were there playing amonst themselves ,watching their play made Neeraj laugh. He felt happy and made mind that next time he'd coming with all his family.
Ram was a student of class 12 he used the river bridge to go for school one day he was coming from school when he was walking on bridge he feels good when the cold air touch his face he feels good and fresh then he decide daily he spent his spare tym on this bridge and see the nature beauty and enjoy it was a good place for walking and running then he came there daily and feel good and fresh in that atmosphere
Rohit Rawat was 30 yr old teacher from Convent Public School Rishikesh, Uttarakhand. One day he got task from school principal to organize Rafting Expedition. Rohit went to Ganga River Rafting place, considered venue over the bridge, did google for least rout rate,check equipments like inflatable rafting boat,life jacket,helmets,carbon paddles,wet suit,rescue throw bags. Rafting route was around 9 km, collected money from participants,before that performed medical check up,invited SDM,who flagged the expedition,winner awarded by SDM and Principal, they appreciated him for successful organization. Thank you.
Sohan was. A college student one day when he came from college he was in very good mood he called his friend and asked her to meet on the overbridge he got ready and went to the over bridge where he saw people's are walking some are boating and dogs are also playing near the river and weather was so pleasent he was enjoying the weather and was wating his friend
Characters.5-6,Age 20 to 35
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Sahil is a 12 class student who lives in Kishtwar district of jammu and Kashmir.Once he goes for a walk towards the river side on Sunday.Its calm all around.A couple is enjoying boat sail.Some people and dogs also near the river bank.Suddenly,the boat capsizes and the male partner overturns.Female cries for help.Sahil over the bridge dives into the river.Another young man also dives and both of them manage to save the couple.Rams early and quick action saved life of two humans
Your story is good but try to not induce problem by your own. Have a nice day
DeleteThe theme of the story is good but central character is more heroic
DeleteIshwar , 28 years work as asoftware engineer in summer vacation he decided to go for trip at rishikesh he consult with his family members at this and finally decided to go for trip them ishwar call at tourism office of rishikesh and get the information of spot they went there and enjoy river rafting tracking attend puja they enjoy a lot and finally come home
ReplyDeleteRam is a young IT professional. One day his company organised a tour to Uttarakhand and he agreed to join. They agreed to go for trekking at the Rupin Pass. They successfully finished the trek and Ram stood on a bridge for a while and admired the nature as he saw a couple strolling at the base with their pet dogs and a couple enjoying their boating expedition in the river flowing through the pass. He decided to take up a course in trekking to become a professional trekker. He left his job and successfully finished the course and became a certified trekker. He became a trekking guide at the Rupin Pass and later received a sponsorship from the company he had earlier worked to fund his trekking expeditions.
ReplyDeleteRajan is a very dedicated and hardworking aspirant who was preparing for CDS examination, despite all his efforts,he was not able to qualify the examination so he decided to spend some time alone and visited nearby river in his locality where he was able to introspect and found his mistakes and now he was totally refreshed and returned home with more excitement and energy. This time he did not repeat his previous mistakes and able to qualify the CDS examination in the very next attempt
ReplyDeleteYou could have taken a person who is in the boat who has friends and could have written about them rather than picking a alone person which shows that u could only relate to the person who is alone...
DeleteRohan, age 16
ReplyDeleteHe was student of class 10. It's a school trip to go gridih.
Rohan was going to the bridge . He saw a beautiful seen of Nature.
He enjoyed the trip and clicking a lots of pictures with friends and teacher.
Now , all student was back to your home. he saw his pictures of trip to family
5 characters, 2 animals
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The land of God, Uttarakhand, has a very beautiful city of Rishikesh with the perfect mountains, Ram and Lakshman Khula with a amazing view of the magnificent river Ganga. The river Ganga forms Devprayag where it meets Bhagirathi a few kilometers above Rishikesh. Rahi, was visiting the city for the first time and was amazed with its beauty. In the evening he along with a guide thought to explore the city and went to see a no. Of cafes and spent quality time feeling the cold breeze of Ganga. During the day time he tried white water rafting in Ganga.
A great story
DeleteA boy on bridge who visited that bridge and seeing the view where a couple with two dogs standing like any person is capturing there photo and another couple on boat in river they where spending some good time together
ReplyDelete5 characters, two main characters, one female and one male. Both are in neutral mood. Rony was college graduate who was preparing for CDS exam. He had cleared his exam and his SSB was due soon. He had been worried for quite some time and he wanted to talk it out with his friend Kumari. They met up by the riverside where they talked and she helped him realise that what he's feeling is natural and instead of fighting the feeling, he should use it to better prepare himself. This helped him clear his mind and calm down and afterwards they walked back home.
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ReplyDeleteHarshith is the person of yenepoya village
Yenepoya is the village it's 28km far from the city mangalore. it's hill area it's covered by forest area.Netravathi river is obstruct to yenepoya people to reach for city govt not taken any seriousness till.
Village people come and request to DC to build the bridge DC ordered finally the bridge is completed within 1 year of time
Now every village peoples are happy
They are easily go to city.
There is the boy name Raghu who was a very good artist and he draw a very good environment showing the beautiful nature with humans and got first price in the class .
ReplyDeleteHere suraj is prepared for RAW ,but it is his 3rd attempt in which he was fail he upset and go at river bridge he observe that one couple enjoying by boat sailing, one think he imbued the boat in direction opposite wave of river means couple enjoy when they push their obstacles(river wave) by boat stick and he click that "any type of your life journey is blissful when you trying to push yourself forwardly in negative waves like of river .so he learn that push his 3 rd attempt backward and vison keep as forwardly ,plan for his 4 th attempt
ReplyDeleteHere suraj is prepared for RAW ,but it is his 3rd attempt in which he was fail he upset and go at river bridge he observe that one couple enjoying by boat sailing, one think he imbued the boat in direction opposite wave of river means couple enjoy when they push their obstacles(river wave) by boat stick and he click that "any type of your life journey is blissful when you trying to push yourself forwardly in negative waves like of river .so he learn that push his 3 rd attempt backward and vison keep as forwardly ,plan for his 4 th attempt
ReplyDeleteNeeraj , 23 year old was feeling tired of living in big city with tall buildings surrounding him all the time. He took a vacation to Haridwar, Uttarakhand to refresh his mind ,standing on a bridge over gigantic yet calm river he felt calm and relaxed . The environment of the place was very soothing a couple was enjoying boating and another was walking along the bank of river. Two dogs were there playing amonst themselves ,watching their play made Neeraj laugh. He felt happy and made mind that next time he'd coming with all his family.
ReplyDeleteRam was a student of class 12 he used the river bridge to go for school one day he was coming from school when he was walking on bridge he feels good when the cold air touch his face he feels good and fresh then he decide daily he spent his spare tym on this bridge and see the nature beauty and enjoy it was a good place for walking and running then he came there daily and feel good and fresh in that atmosphere
ReplyDeleteRohit Rawat was 30 yr old teacher from Convent Public School Rishikesh, Uttarakhand. One day he got task from school principal to organize Rafting Expedition. Rohit went to Ganga River Rafting place, considered venue over the bridge, did google for least rout rate,check equipments like inflatable rafting boat,life jacket,helmets,carbon paddles,wet suit,rescue throw bags. Rafting route was around 9 km, collected money from participants,before that performed medical check up,invited SDM,who flagged the expedition,winner awarded by SDM and Principal, they appreciated him for successful organization.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
Sohan was. A college student one day when he came from college he was in very good mood he called his friend and asked her to meet on the overbridge he got ready and went to the over bridge where he saw people's are walking some are boating and dogs are also playing near the river and weather was so pleasent he was enjoying the weather and was wating his friend
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